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Out of reach
Contributed by
angrymargarita
on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 12:43:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Why can't I think
Why can't I get you out of my mind
It's because I love you
And to me you are unreachable
You can't be won with the swing of a sword
Or the love of me.
To me you will always be "friend"
I wish it were more
But your unreachable shell is impossible to break
So if you can understad
I love you
Just don't lose what we've got
For the one reason people love
Is to keep the candle burning
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angrymargarita
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2005-08-21 12:43:43]
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Re: Out of reach
(User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:29:57 AM AEST
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Nice poem! I understand the feeling of
loving someone more than what is expected
of you. Sadly, the love remains unrequited.
Keep writing!
-Butch
-The Betrayer of Hope |
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Re: Out of reach
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by worldsenigma on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 03:54:59 PM AEST
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i know the feeling trust me
why does luv have to be so difficult
:(
i think i might giv up on it |
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