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A Trail of Stars
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:47:31 AM in AEST
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There is a trail of stars that leads me here,
to this glorious place of happy summers.
For in thine eyes I see a spring,
the beginnings of love and better things.
Upon thy lips a smile the warmth of a thousand suns,
that even in winter climes keeps me warm and fine.
I want to dance and dance in the windy summer breeze,
so that I can become one with those that your tresses breathe.
I want to climb the clouds and be just like the rain,
so that I can fall upon and caress your lovely skin.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2005-08-21 09:47:31]
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Re: A Trail of Stars
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by maestar on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 10:44:16 AM AEST
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I love this poem.
Great write, full of heart and soul |
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Re: A Trail of Stars
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 10:00:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful words, no doubt about it. Foolish memories to a fool may be nearly indistinguishable from fond memories of a poet, so think on that possiblility.
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Re: A Trail of Stars
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 10:25:37 PM AEST
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ah then I guess we are all fools.....
Your intro truely says it all and yet is hardly needed as this piece truely stands on its own. |
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