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The Boy and the flute
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 07:34:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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He sits down on the sand
And speaks to the sea
That calms
Coming gently
To kiss his feet
His fragile fingers
Take the flute to His lips
and of it echoes
the sweetest melody
The little fish
they jump expedite
as if called to see
who plays like that
In such a vast stage
They jump cheerfully
Drawing in the air the notes
that leave from the flute
Far away, in the high sea
the mermaids wake up
Charmed with that magic sound
And come to join
Filling the Night
With their beautiful songs
The flashing beacon of the lighthouse
dancing happily
an array of colours
On that life stage
That was being born
On a moonlight night
by the sea.
By Fernanda F. Rocha
Copyright ©
Fernanda_F_Rocha
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2005-08-21 07:34:22]
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Re: The Boy and the flute
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 07:39:30 AM AEST
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This is beautiful. I love the images it creates, and I can even imagine the music.
You have created a beautiful scene here, one that I won't forget for a while.
Good write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: The Boy and the flute
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 08:12:23 AM AEST
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| a great write, well done |
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Re: The Boy and the flute
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by brew on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 02:23:25 PM AEST
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Wow.what a nice. lil ditty....it was calming, and full of imagination.!
Enjoyed.....!
Brew~ |
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Re: The Boy and the flute
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:53:32 AM AEST
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Your imagery is mesmerizing. Being a lover of the sea and a believer of fantasy I could visualize it so easily. What an exquisitely delightful evening that would be. Thank you. I truly enjoyed this.
Smiles,
Rita |
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