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I'll Still Be Here
Contributed by
zenaprincess
on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 06:54:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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So far away now,
A million miles or more,
I guess life goes on
But I’m no longer sure.
You pushed me away
And my heart broke,
Our lifelong friendship
Up in smoke.
You hold my life up
And all that you see -
A pinnacle of excellence,
All you wanted to be.
Why don't you know
That I cry too?
That I stand on the brink
Just like you do.
The difference is
That I open my life,
A million hearts cry
When I’m in strife.
Don’t be so proud girl,
You forget what’s true -
That someone like me
Will never judge you.
Yes your life's hard,
That I can't deny.
I can't pretend I'll fix it,
Can hold you when you cry.
Keep trying to be strong
But be without doubt,
My shoulder’s all yours,
I won’t shut you out.
The years will go on
But I’ll still be here,
Waiting for you
To once more be near.
kb 26/7/05
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Re: I'll Still Be Here
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 07:08:14 AM AEST
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Awww, I can understand this.
I have had friendships turn away, myself. And I still miss them.
This is a really good write. Your feelings are shown well, and in a way I'm sure many readers can understand and relate to.
Great write.
*husg* Phil xxx |
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Re: I'll Still Be Here
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 07:30:02 AM AEST
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| Very nice poem and well writing. Maybe you can show her what you wrote for her :) |
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Re: I'll Still Be Here
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 07:30:03 AM AEST
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| Very nice poem and well writing. Maybe you can show her what you wrote for her :) |
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Re: I'll Still Be Here
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by Sahara on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 07:45:32 AM AEST
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Excellent! Such a great write, very helt felt.
If you haven't shown her this you really should, best of luck.
Sonya |
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Re: I'll Still Be Here
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by BloodyTears5 on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:45:43 AM AEST
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great poem. well written. i was almost like a song.
keep up the good work
~Sarah |
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Re: I'll Still Be Here
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by somedaylove on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 03:26:35 PM AEST
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| I agree with sarah the your words flow like a song........... If she hadn't seen she needs to. Its a wonderfull write keep it up and keep the faith it is strength for you both |
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Re: I'll Still Be Here
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by evilfairy on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 12:25:31 AM AEST
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oh :( very sad
who is this about?
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Re: I'll Still Be Here
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by evilfairy on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:19:23 AM AEST
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actually just realised exactly who this about....
:( i hope she understands soon |
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