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Starry Nights
Contributed by
Beckett0306
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Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 02:45:31 AM in AEST
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In the country there is no light
The stars they are so bright.
Your love has gone away
But I wish that with me it would stay.
No girl to You, Could compare
It’s at you my eyes can’t help but stare.
It’s times like these, back to you I fall
Drink too much and make dumb calls.
Many girls in this world like stars in the sky
But only with you I want to be, my heart won’t let me lie.
So I’ll just sit here and stare at Orion’s Belt,
And think of how you still make my heart melt.
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Beckett0306
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2005-08-21 02:45:31]
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Re: Starry Nights
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 03:29:55 AM AEST
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| aww this is sad and beautiful. it hurts to lose those we care about. good write A+++ |
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Re: Starry Nights
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by oreo_kisses on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 04:06:18 AM AEST
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| this is a really great poem... sweet yet heartbreaking at teh same time... good piece! |
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Re: Starry Nights
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 07:25:11 AM AEST
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This is very sad, and very sweet.
It's hard to let people go, I know.
And especially when something as beautiful as the stars are associated with them.
Good write, I hope you feel better soon.
Phil xxx |
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