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MISSING YOU.
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 09:58:56 PM in AEST
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The ripple of the waves, as their carried out to sea,
the sound of children laughing, playing happily,
the birds up in the trees, the humming of the bees,
the gentle rustling sound, as the wind blows all the leaves.
An organ, a violin, all music in my ears,
a beautiful voice singing, to my eyes brings sudden tears,
there is one sound I miss, that leaves my heart so broken,
never to hear from your lips again, my name so softly spoken.
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lillyjane
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2005-08-20 21:58:56]
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Re: MISSING YOU.
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:08:57 PM AEST
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Been there, done that, and my heart is still broken. That is the hardest part. Not hearing their voice or turn to reach for them in the night and there is nothing but cold pillow. You sketched it perfectly.
Blessings,
Rita |
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Re: MISSING YOU.
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by twobabies on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:22:42 PM AEST
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great write, i really enjoyed it.
hit close to home with my chaotic life. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: MISSING YOU.
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by TheKid on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:20:17 PM AEST
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| I really like this one... nice write |
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Re: MISSING YOU.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 01:11:41 AM AEST
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| A very good poem, short and sweet, loved it. SLipSiX. |
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Re: MISSING YOU.
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by maestar on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 10:38:07 AM AEST
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Loved it
very soulful.
Great poetry with a heartful shine. |
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