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Your breath
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 05:39:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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The only reason I have worth taking another breath
Is the hope one day,
Of sharing the same air as you…
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holderofthestone
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2005-08-20 17:39:48]
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Re: Your breath
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 06:24:37 PM AEST
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| very sweet, romantic and straight to the point. I love it. Hope that you get that chance one day whomever she is |
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Re: Your breath
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by brew on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 06:50:04 PM AEST
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To the one who is so lucky to receive the breath in the same room, or place with you! Very well done..........good quote.! Hope it is taken................
Brew~ |
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Re: Your breath
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 07:55:05 PM AEST
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| A very short poem though interesting, it reminds me of a scene I saw in a movie called Waterworld, I liked that movie but everyone else seemed to not like it, anyway a girl and I guy were running from bad guys on a ship and the bad guys were on jet skis, the way they got away was they went under water and he put his lips around her lips and breathed for both of then, I have always wondered if woud actually work, but I do not think I could, anyway don't mean to keep rammbling on, good write. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Your breath
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:04:26 AM AEST
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| "This" is a very cool poem. It can be taken a lot of ways. You truly are a great writer. |
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