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Contributed by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 05:05:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



Let's watch a movie, or some t.v
I just want to lay next to you
Feel your body heat next to me
fight urges my hands want to ensue

Wrap your arms around me, my head on your chest
we're relaxed...pull the covers up around us
Neither one of us intent on getting much rest
we crave the same thing; no need to discuss

The look shared between us, is all that need be said
Here it is! At last, our first kiss---sparks fly
Fire of anticipation throughout my body spread
Mmm that was nice...you kiss me again as a reply

Let's take it slow, I'm not going anywhere
you are what my life's been lacking
This intimate connection is beyond compare
I promise to remain true, no heartache will I bring

Is that what you needed to hear? Well it's true
Planting kisses on my body, every curve, exploring
A lifelong love with you is all I plan to pursue
Fiery passion combusts---exploding

This night, this love, I never want it to end
held in your arms, the world is at my feet
Our nurturing friendship we watched transcend
With you in my life, I am now complete




Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2005-08-20 17:05:04]
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Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 05:08:43 PM AEST
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very sweet. lovely words placed in a beatuiful flow. great job


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 05:10:04 PM AEST
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hmm... congratulations on finding that someone. Good feeling - I know. :-D
And it just gets so that eternity is not long enough too.
Beautiful lines. Warm loving write.
Blessings, J.


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 05:11:24 PM AEST
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Aye HauntedScorp, where've you been? It has been so long since I have read your work. A Very romantic, beautiful poem loved it. SLipSiX.


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Writting_Fever on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 05:29:12 PM AEST
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A very beautiful and sensual poem. I love the way that you made me picture you two together. It is a great feeling isn't it?!
Wonderful


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 06:29:17 PM AEST
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Scorpenator! That is truly an inspirational, wonderful, and beautifully written poem of new love and forever love. Penned so well with great talent. Thoroughly enjoyed this write and hoping that in how it could relate to my own life now and things goes as well for me and named withheld for privacy :) as they are with you.
:-D


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 06:30:33 PM AEST
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very sweet. Must feel good to be complete. Congrats. Thans for sharing


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 07:03:54 PM AEST
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Very nice and passionate write. Loved it. Glad to hear, some can be completed.! Hope this one brings you all the joy and love you have longed for.!

Brew~


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:14:37 PM AEST
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wow... i really hope this is true.. cause if it is i'm as glad as hell for you, scorp. it must be amazing for you if you are really going through this. well, written. keep up the good work!

~sprints


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:16:48 PM AEST
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Scorpy, I am so happy for you. Isn't it absolutely the most wonderful feeling in the world to be completed by someone. That last piece of the puzzle that fits just perfectly. Wishing you happiness and hope this is your forever.

Rita


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:24:53 PM AEST
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The passion drips from my monitor..lol
phew..

I love how you've marshalled the ideas, from beginning to proverbial end Scorp,
on new love and things of the like..

(nods head in agreement)
Love is grand-


As Always-

B



Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 12:32:13 AM AEST
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Scorp this was a beautiful write, so intimate, so romantic. Peace, Laura


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by Skinney86 on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 12:45:44 AM AEST
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Wow. This is a poem that will last the test of time. This is one that can be read many years from now, and still mean the same thing, love will never change.


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by somedaylove on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 02:19:56 AM AEST
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How beautiful, wonderful feelings flow as i read.......sounds like you soulmate in life. May we all be lucky enough to find a person to share life with like this. keep up the great writes.


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by emystar on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 04:29:30 AM AEST
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Awh very sweet. good luck to u both.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 11:47:37 AM AEST
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Depicted very nicely lovely poetry filled with longing thoughts and heartfelt wishes, well done scorp as always . . .


Ben


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Lancaster on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:30:32 PM AEST
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wow scorp..this was just beutiful...and what makes it more than just beutiful...is that your honesty and sincerity come through strongly.....this poem was amazing and as real as they come....you are a genius....nighty night scorpy


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 11:06:39 AM AEST
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You really are a romantic Scorp, and maybe that's why you write love poetry so well. I agree that this poem has a nice flow and rhythum :), good choice of words don't you think.

Really Scorp, it is a lovely write of a consumated love relationship

Will


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 05:00:27 PM AEST
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Good write. I should say more but i think your words are adequately said.


Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 02:23:33 AM AEST
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Hi Mom, I'm home...pardon me for taking so long to get to this delicious write...

Wow, woo weeeee.... Scorp, you hit every angle of my mind reading this.. now I feel complete.. you are an excellent writer, do you know that? What a warm and cozy write here.. its just balaazin...with love...

Raquel Leah :D



Re: Complete (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 06:45:13 PM AEST
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beautifully sweet, written gently and in such a classy
romantic way,

hugs n' love nessa




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