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Marques jutes je.... (Just makes me …)
Contributed by
JenJen
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Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 03:33:03 PM in AEST
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Le bruit de la bruise
Contra labret
Minacity à vouloir aller aaww
L'écorce d'un chien
Courir avec une notation
Marques justes que je veut crier HEY
Les rayons du soleil
Frapper l'herbe
Marques justes que je veut me coucher
Juste les baisses minuscules de pluie
Frapper le verre
Marques justes que je veut gémir
L'arc-en-ciel coloré
Au-dessus du ciel
Marques justes que je veut au soupir
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The sound of the breeze
Against the tree’s
Just makes me want to go aaww
The bark of a dog
Running with a log
Just makes me want to shout HEY
The rays of the sun
Hitting the grass
Just makes me want to lie down
The tiny rain drops
Hitting the glass
Just makes me want to groan
The colourful rainbow
Over the sky
Just makes me want to sigh
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JenJen
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Re: Marques jutes je.... (Just makes me …)
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 04:31:35 PM AEST
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| This poem made me go and see most of your poems. It just caught me in some way that made me curious :) i liked the way You write, light simple and beautiful. Good work You have here, Congratulations! |
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Re: Marques jutes je.... (Just makes me …)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 05:04:44 PM AEST
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| Interesting. |
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Re: Marques jutes je.... (Just makes me …)
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 05:13:42 PM AEST
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| descriptive write. . deiffernt and interesting. |
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Re: Marques jutes je.... (Just makes me …)
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by colinbaker62 on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 07:12:24 PM AEST
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Bravo JenJen ! C'est bien vous savez
Colin (I have studied just a little French) |
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Re: Marques jutes je.... (Just makes me …)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 08:23:01 PM AEST
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| I like this, it's sweet. |
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Re: Marques jutes je.... (Just makes me …)
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 04:22:33 PM AEST
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wel la de dar miss im good at french
o im only jking jenbob, its a really good poem!!!
*hugs* |
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Re: Marques jutes je.... (Just makes me …)
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by jemer on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:36:32 AM AEST
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| random but kl, rock on |
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