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Caramel

Contributed by Vermilion on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 03:21:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry




We produce air guns
In a rage against nothing

We bottle it up, we bottle it up

We sing for a thousand suns
Reaching out for something

We can't do anything but bottle it up

And the harsh steel coolness of the blade at our wrists
At the time of our twists
Twisted laughter of the ****
And the harsh steel coolness of the gun at our heads
Longing for dread
To one day be dead
All we ever do is bottle it up

Been having a pretty bad day
Every day of my life

We bottle it up, we bottle it up

Never gone my way
Caramel flavoured lie

I don't know what to do but bottle it up
And the harsh steel coolness of the blades at our wrists
At the time of our twists
Twisted laughter of the ****
And the harsh steel coolness of the guns at our heads
Longing for dread
To one day be dead
All we ever do is bottle it up

I don't need no, caramel
I don't need a, wishful well
It's just a phase, just a phase
I don't want you
I don't want you

Why do I want you?!

And the harsh steel coolness of the blades at our wrists
At the time of our twists
Twisted laughter of the ****
And the harsh steel coolness of the guns at our heads
Longing for dread
To one day be dead
All we ever do is
Bottle the feelings up

Maybe the look is deranged
Maybe the cooking is strange
Maybe I'm just in your head
One day we'll end up dead

Maybe I'm just a fool

And the harsh steel coolness of the blades at our wrists
At the time of our twists
Twisted laughter of the ****
And the harsh steel coolness of the guns at our heads
Longing for dread
To one day be dead
All we ever do is bottle it up




Copyright © Vermilion ... [ 2005-08-20 15:21:14]
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Re: Caramel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 03:29:34 PM AEST
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Ok, damn, this poem scared the hell out of me, I could barely stand to finish, I know where you are going with this poem though, humans always find a way to destroy themselves, good write though. SLipSiX.


Re: Caramel (User Rating: 1 )
by Fernanda_F_Rocha on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 04:37:51 PM AEST
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SLipSiX. comment made me laugh and I have to agree, good writing :)


Re: Caramel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 08:27:15 PM AEST
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Very interesting. I like your style in this.




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