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Lost dreams
Contributed by
PolarBear
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Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 01:02:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I used to dream of you but now all I do is beam and gleam at you. It is a long lost dream which I would love to re deam. Now it seems I have no dreams since your gone and out of means.
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Re: Lost dreams
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 02:03:07 PM AEST
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Very short but Very sweet i really liked this line
I used to dream of you but now all I do is beam and gleam at you.
keep up the good work! |
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Re: Lost dreams
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 03:07:00 PM AEST
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| Short and to the point, I liked it. The ending was good as well. |
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Re: Lost dreams
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by brew on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 07:07:02 PM AEST
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To have the dream and make it reality........good write.....with a nice point. !
Brew~! |
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Re: Lost dreams
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 10:00:33 PM AEST
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Short, sweet and right to the point. Great write.
Hugs,
Dreamer |
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