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In the photographs
Contributed by
Rickshaw
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Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:58:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In the Photographs.
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Dropping every day,
and enjoying the fall,
I ain't got a phone,
but I can hear you call,
we had a lot of fun,
we had a lot of laughs,
I'll see you again girl,
in the photographs.
Falling every day,
I ain't talking *****,
Drink only reminds me,
of chances missed.
Keepin out of town,
Keeping out of bars,
staring straight ahead,
but sometimes at stars.
In the photographs,
Everybody smiles,
Everyone's happy,
For a short while,
I'll take you out tonight,
and lay you on the table,
I would ride these photographs
if I was able.
Copyright ©
Rickshaw
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2005-08-20 11:58:12]
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Re: In the photographs
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by brew on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 12:03:46 PM AEST
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hmmmm, well a differ write, and differ thoughts for this. Well maybe it was a calling card, to find them again?! lol.....lil risque calling card, yet we all have our own ways of teasing.!
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Re: In the photographs
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 01:42:53 PM AEST
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Sounds like an invitation to return them to me. I hate the word ain't. Can you use the proper work next time in your work. It lowers the quality of an otherwise good piece of work.
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Re: In the photographs
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:31:47 PM AEST
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Well, it seems she took you for a ride first..
I like the metaphor.. last stanza..
Its a good thing she left you with something lol.
Its not all lost lol..
Nice write...
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