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Rose to Foe
Contributed by
TheKid
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Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:54:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Goodbye my precious loving rose
You have grown into one of my evilest foes
I merely remain a vivid memory of your past
I quickly wonder why it could not last
What is this battle we are fighting?
Wish I could erase the pages and change it with my own clever writing
I’m through throwing punches, I’m sure I fought enough
Look into my eyes cant you see this is not a bluff
This could be a great mistake
One I wish I did not have to partake
But I can not live on with my heart in a million pieces
Day by day I pray the number of pieces gradually decreases
After all this time I realize I do not need you anymore
I have closed the drawer and slammed the door
You are permanently out of my mind
Sweep away the memories into a large bucket, as I close this chapter pulling down the everlasting blind
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TheKid
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2005-08-20 11:54:25]
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Re: Rose to Foe
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 01:52:45 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem, heartfelt, just remember the sites rules....it will help you have more comments! |
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Re: Rose to Foe
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by maestar on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 10:41:01 AM AEST
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Good poem.
liked the last line |
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Re: Rose to Foe
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by Mikayla on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 07:26:06 PM AEST
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Hey its me again
i really liked this poem
like i said in all the comments i love your form of poetry
please contact me soon!
great poem
im not just saying that! :) |
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