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Heaven Above
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:15:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Bless me father
For I have sinned
In love I believed
Once again.
Me heart is sick
Of these chains
Chest ripped open,
A heart torn apart.
Non believer of love
I've become
God, replace me soul
With a chill so cold
As Mother Winter
Leave me to rest,
Let me body rot,
In this waste land
Of pain and agony
Tired of this world,
Here me say:
Goodbye Cruel World,
May me spirit find the faith
To live the life I deserve,
In Heaven above.
~~ Nats ~~
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Re: Heaven Above
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:32:07 AM AEST
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Oh Nat...
I'm so sorry you feel this way. I really am. Please, don't give up. You will find him one day. He's still out there.
This is such a heartbreaking write. I can really feel it.
Good write. I hope you feel better soon.
*hugs*
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Re: Heaven Above
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 01:47:45 PM AEST
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You should not base your life on someone else being there. You have to learn to be your strength and armour. I am sorry you are hurt, but you are a grown woman with children and you should learn to take care of you without a man. They can be the icing on the cake, but not the foundation. I wish you luck, but you have to make it.
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Re: Heaven Above
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:31:00 PM AEST
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I know your pain and I understand it's depth from our bond of friendship.
If I could wave a wand for you and make your dreams come true I would.
Unfortunately I don't have that power.Take pride in what you have, your children, your house and the friends that really care for you.One day your prince will come !!
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Re: Heaven Above
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 08:52:00 PM AEST
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Wow! That is powerful..filled with sadness and emotions expressed with wonderful wording. I don't see this as a suicidal at all; especially since it's under "Self Struggling Poetry". A cryful plea to God for assistance when that "day" finally comes maybe but it doesn't appear you want to actually abandon this earth...this life.
This is an absolute emotionally packed truly wonderful write. You have a great talent.
Keep it up. :) Chin up...awesome talent.
Hope you realize your self worth.
Take care,
Tim
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