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One day we have to die
Contributed by
veenu
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Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 07:00:13 AM in AEST
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life is the starting of the end,
a long lasting continuing trend,
here some born,where theygone,
here some won,where they drown ;
while speaking about,
a speachless sound...............
i never thought i will die,
i never want to understand that the next day is mine;
while watching the wrinkled faces,
those holding there traces,
i collect my memories,
i entered in to the world of note-books,
rearranged my words,
and display all the colours which my pen shades.............
yet my words brilliant and bright ,
but not ment for my eye,
cause i dont want to know ,
that one day i have to die.....
i have to die...............
Copyright ©
veenu
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2005-08-20 07:00:13]
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Re: One day we have to die
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 07:46:01 AM AEST
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| Good poem and good writting. |
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Re: One day we have to die
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by colinbaker62 on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:16:30 AM AEST
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Hi veenu this is very interesting. I liked reading it very much. There is indeed one maxim none of us can avoid, and that is death at some point.
Colin |
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Re: One day we have to die
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:35:21 PM AEST
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Hi Veenu:
What a loaded poem this is.. jam packed with thoughts.. and questions..
Oh I know.. the fear.. its a hard one.. but hey.. for me, instead of fearing the end.. I rejoice in that first line of yours which means to me...
***** life is the starting of the end,
Life is the starting of the end on earth.. I go one step further.. the end of our journey here on earth.. and the beginning of life in heaven.. Ok, so, I can't help it.. I am a spiritual being.. an angel bit me.. I can't help it..
I love your write here.. it inspired me very much... I should love to read more of your other work..
A reader friend,
RLPoetess ; )) |
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Re: One day we have to die
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 03:29:04 AM AEST
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| Thought provoking write. I believe we are here now in this human shell...where we have been before and where we will go next is locked somewhere within us. But I believe when a life goes another is born. I wish I could remember...Peace to you, Laura |
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