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Don't Fear the Night
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 01:38:19 AM in AEST
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Inside your room by failing light
You try to sleep through bitter night
But shadows creep inside your dreams
Your inner soul in silence screams
A scream of terror, inner fright
You fear the wanderers of the night
But still a battle rages on
Your spirit wrestles ‘til the dawn
Inside your soul, a sheltered light
Shines out to break the darkest night
A candle boasting brilliant flame
Can surely any darkness tame
I’ll pray for you, God grant His light
To help you sleep in troubled night
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wachumiri
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by oreo_kisses on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 01:51:14 AM AEST
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| this is an awesome poem and you should keep up the REALLY great work! |
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by Loende on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 02:16:08 AM AEST
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Nya heru nenime,
May that light come soon. Job well done, as usual.
Manwe lores,
Loende
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by trixxx on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 04:52:38 AM AEST
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| cool poem, heaps good work |
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:57:17 PM AEST
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David, you're a caring friend and this poem was a great display of that.
Love and peace,
Chelsea |
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:49:27 PM AEST
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Your work sounds much better off the page in two-line stanzas like this than in short four-liners. It's true that format is a whole realm of importance for written/read poetry.
Keep it up.
Andrew |
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by brokengirl on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 11:43:38 PM AEST
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u know i love this poem and it means so much to me. thank u for writing it and showing it to me. i read it when i need a boost to make it through a rough night sometimes. i absolutely love it. no one had ever written a poem for me before so it means a lot to me. thanks again. keep writing cause i love to read your poems.
talk to u soon
-hailey- |
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:58:29 PM AEST
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David, I love the sincerity and simplicity that comes with this poem. You are a wonderful, caring friend and this piece shows in.
Your adopted sis,
Em |
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by lostwithoutyou on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 04:32:08 PM AEST
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I really like this one. Very good.
Love always,
Brina. |
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by Archie on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 08:17:14 AM AEST
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You have written a very awesome poem here.
"Do not let the noise distract you from my voice
Do not give in to the scary choice
Child I love you from my very heart
And I will protect you from the dark"
From Lullaby
You show a writing style that brings peace to the reader. Thanks
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by fielding88 on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 10:48:18 PM AEST
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| Great piece you've written here, and your short stanzas each have a memorable line that will most definitely linger in my head, most notably the second-to-last one, which I find to be the most interesting of them all. Wonderful. |
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by anitajames on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:30:36 AM AEST
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| I like the ending to this. Is there nothing more touching than someone saying they will pray for you? |
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by Spike on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 07:28:36 AM AEST
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A wonderful, lilting quality, half lullaby half prayer of protection - all poem. Nice one.
Spike |
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by SunflowersAndTea on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 12:59:11 AM AEST
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| this is absolutly lovely...the emotion is so raw, and pure in essence, it is rare to find a poem such as this.... |
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 08:24:07 AM AEST
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"Inside your soul, a sheltered light
Shines out to break the darkest night"
So true..wonderful and meaningful write..
This morning I read this and i could not comment at that moment.
Thanks once again for sharing your delightful, well designed write. venkat
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:33:17 PM AEST
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David what can I say? You leave me speechless. What a remarkle touching write you have written to ur friend. May this friend be granted His light and sleep at ease every night.
*hugs* from ur fan,
Sue |
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by Archie on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 08:58:59 AM AEST
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| I like this! The poem is a good answer to one I wrote called "fellowship with the dark" I am definately inspired by this poem |
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Re: Don't Fear the Night
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 12:03:46 PM AEST
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| beautiful! hugs n' love nessa |
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