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Creation
Contributed by
orange_vette_chick
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Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 09:41:57 PM in AEST
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God, you send such obsticles
such as tradgety into this world
like your punishing some of us
like things in our past
will affect our nature
You create choices
for people like your testing them
like you want to know
if they can resist tempation
You create love
in the strangest of places
you create people pleasure
in mysterious ways,
from the most unusal things
The ways you prove your desires
your desired plans
are so extordinary
so unexplainable; beyond belief
You show us what is right in front of us
can be enough, but also there mybe better
there maybe something you will love more.
That life is all about taking chances...
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2005-08-19 21:41:57]
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Re: Creation
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by Stellar on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 11:57:28 PM AEST
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You basically just described how I've been feeling for about the past couple of months.
He certainly does like to keep us constantly guessing.
I'm glad I found your poem.
I was starting to think I was crazy lol.
Take Care,
Lizzie
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Re: Creation
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 02:48:27 AM AEST
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I like this one too, it's really cool. You have a way with words.
Take care.
David
*Still feels rather foolish* |
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