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True Evil Never Dies
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 04:57:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You like to hit
You like to bite
You enjoy my screaming
Through the night
You like to say
This is my due
This is my price
For loving you
You're my father
No matter what you do
You can't change that
I wish you could too.
So pick me up
To throw me down
You'll never beat
The defiance out.
Because there's a life
Outside our own
I can almost smell
The fresh grass grow
Almost feel
The warm sunshine
Drying my tears
And giving me light
I've found a strength
I didn't have before
I've found my spirit
And you can't have my soul
I'm your daughter
Your anger's in me too
Fight fire with fire
And I'll defeat you.
Next time you hit me
I'll only hit back
With a knife in my pocket
Is how I'll attack
And in your last moments
You'll look in my eyes
And then you'll realize
True evil never dies.
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Re: True Evil Never Dies
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by maestar on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 05:01:36 PM AEST
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disturbingly good
hope you handled it in the right way. |
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Re: True Evil Never Dies
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by colinbaker62 on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 06:38:00 PM AEST
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This is so touching for me personally as I am the father of three daughters. I do hope that your dad does recognise that something is not right in your relationship as you clearly can see. Not only that, but you are giving form to your feelings through the power of words. I do hope your situation improves over time. Good luck
Colin |
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Re: True Evil Never Dies
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 04:41:28 AM AEST
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When I was 16 I grabbed my foster Dad's hand in the air as it was about to strike me and said "I'm to big for you to be hitting."
He put his hand down and said "Your right" He never touched me again. I can relate so much to this piece. Hitting doesn't change ones mind.Understanding and talking it through usually is a preferred action. Good luck little one. |
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