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An invitation from a vampire
Contributed by
maestar
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Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 04:33:58 PM in AEST
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Through the dark I feel his eyes,
Wearing night as a disguise.
Through the rain I heard his voice,
Giving me a dreaded choice.
Have the day and pretty flowers
Or trade them in for midnight hours.
Blood runs cold and people fear you
Can't get old, nobody near you
His eyes get dark, His voice gets low
What's your answer, yes or no?
Shall you smile and let me in,
Or cast me out for warmth of skin.
Life is cruel and full of sadness
Let it go, embrace the madness.
Now he climbs up to the window.
He grabs my arm and won't let go.
Come with me into the night,
You know that there's no need to fight
The choice is yours, I wont force you
Aren't you sick of life and fortune?
Take my hand swim in the death,
When you're dead we'll kill the rest
My lips part the words come out
Don't want to scream, don't want to shout
."The line between love and hate is thin
If you like...............
YOU CAN COME IN."
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Re: An invitation from a vampire
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 05:07:38 PM AEST
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wow, that was an awesome poem....i dunno it would be hard decision, it would be tempting lol...amazing write
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Re: An invitation from a vampire
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 05:39:26 PM AEST
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chilling I love this !
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Re: An invitation from a vampire
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by colinbaker62 on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 06:41:14 PM AEST
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Very nice poem. Personally, after nineteen years of marriage I'd welcome it in with open arms, regardless of gender. lol
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Re: An invitation from a vampire
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by vibes2go on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 09:51:24 PM AEST
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Would I take the bright sunlight;
and share my comely voice?
or would I take the shadows
if given but the choice ..
I think I'd like to hide,
and lurk about unknown,
be like a fly upon the wall
if the truth be known...
loved your write.. hope you don't mind me
babbling on ..
mary
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Re: An invitation from a vampire
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by lillyjane on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 09:48:23 AM AEST
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| This poem is brilliant, you are a wonderful poet, I could see that vampire made my blood run cold...Cant even watch the vampire fims.. well done. |
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Re: An invitation from a vampire
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by Bruce on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:55:54 AM AEST
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| don''t think i would, but a great write |
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Re: An invitation from a vampire
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by robertdavidson on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:10:40 AM AEST
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Frightening! A wierd and wonderfully scary write. It's true, we can feel love and repulsion towards the same being. Thanks for sharing.
Robert Davidson. |
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Re: An invitation from a vampire
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by kcampbell on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:57:28 AM AEST
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| Thanks for the comment, it brightened my day! Actually, I don't think I'd let the vampire in, but that's just me... : ) |
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Re: An invitation from a vampire
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 01:37:00 PM AEST
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| You have a way with words. This is an awesome poem about choice. |
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Re: An invitation from a vampire
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by Candice on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 09:19:13 AM AEST
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Loved it Loved it Loved it.
And yes I would let it in.
Just for fun,
Oh wouldn't that be fun.
You got me thinking now.......
Wow well done. |
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Re: An invitation from a vampire
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by shae on
Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 03:27:43 PM AEST
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| I have not logged on in a while and after reading this, I am glad I did. Its amazing. |
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