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far
Contributed by
lancaster
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Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 02:00:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Far gone from where I ought to be
Far more complicated then you and me
Intelligent in its intricacies
Unwoven are the prophesies
Returned broken in one whole piece
Far from the beginning the end awaits
Far from disappearing is the light of day
Depicting a likeness to your face
Predicting the lightning that struck
Then next second
A rhetorical question
Are you real or have you vanished
Almost completed the machines seem conceded
As if cognition were innate
And remission were a certainty of fate
Far from the cure the disease propagates
Far from the shores the heavenly star illuminates
Far from the visible scar the memory radiates
Far from where we now are
We sit and meditate
Lifted to new heights
The proverbial elevate
Where reason stands far ahead
Ready to believe then die instead
Logical verbal reactions
Rational physical attraction
Show me some compassion
Far from beauty is a Godly endeavor
Far from truly is a love forever
Far from now is always never
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Re: far
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 02:34:47 PM AEST
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Not so far...; )
Very good job expressing yourself in this piece...Some of your feelings seem unsure about supposed things to come, but overall there's still positivity in your words...and that's good.
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Re: far
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 12:02:52 AM AEST
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I found it to be a bit obscure..
especially the last line..
but must admit, that I did enjoy reading it-
"Where reason stands far ahead
Ready to believe then die instead"
those lines are very well written..
B
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