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Missing You
Contributed by
naturegirl
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Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:19:41 PM in AEST
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Sunbeams glisten on the morning tide
seagulls are waking at the break of day
my eyes look out upon the vastness
the sea calls as it echoes across the bay
The moon has gone over the horizon
it brings tomorrow in a place far away
our plans for the future disappeared
our dreams sailed away yesterday
As I watch the whitecaps gently sway
your ship gets further out of sight
may God go with you where you go
always remember it is just and it is right
The waves wash upon the sandy shore
as I leave my footprints in the sand
I kneel and pray for your safe return
God please help my heart to understand
They say all is fair in love and in war
though fairness may not come to pass
the winds of change blow upon us
all I feel now is such emptiness, alas
The tides roll back and forth each day
back and forth each night it seems
our love for country is beyond reproach
return to me so I may follow my dreams
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Re: Missing You
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by pixie on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:28:08 PM AEST
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you painted a beautiful yet sad picture with your words, I loved this,it was very well worded
pix xx |
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Re: Missing You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 02:24:15 PM AEST
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| A very beautiful poem I loved it, but there is never fair ness in war, but to be surprised there are rules in war. SLipSiX. Good write. |
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Re: Missing You
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by CrazyCowboy557 on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:25:14 AM AEST
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| Wow, this is an amazing poem, great work, I hope to see more like this in the future. |
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Re: Missing You
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 09:22:39 PM AEST
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Wel now u have my attention.
Great work.
huggs,
emy |
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