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Darkness
Contributed by
Flyinglow
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Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 11:42:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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In the darkness
the pain you feel
begins to soothe
begins to heal
In the darkness
you cry your tears
crushed by the world
and no-one hears
In the darkness
your free to be you
no crowd to please
no act to do
In the light
your no longer free
forced into the person
youve been told to be
Copyright ©
Flyinglow
... [
2005-08-19 11:42:24]
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Re: Darkness
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by TheKid on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 11:57:09 AM AEST
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I like that one! Nice write
Most of the poems I write... I dont like them at all but I still post em away =] |
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Re: Darkness
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by maestar on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 03:58:43 PM AEST
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Great poem. Loved it.
Very good work
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Re: Darkness
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by Stellar on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 12:17:43 AM AEST
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You have every reason to be very happy with this.
It's very very good.
Simple and to the point. A lot of my poems are set up like this one.
Take Care,
Lizzie |
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