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Jagged Edge
Contributed by
Jaycee
on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 09:04:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Emasculated more
each and every day
Tire of this cycle
I insist not today
For all of my protests
nothing has changed
My plans for success
have been rearranged
In the politics of life
I'm not a player
a detriment at work
I haven't a pray-er
I'm not without options
though violent they be
Honed edges of steel
that satisfy me
Weapons that crush
like mace or the flail
but who am I kidding
neither will prevail
Actions so bold
require lots o'willpower
wish that were me
my outlook is sour
Not having the courage
to drive off the ledge
Consider a new option
... the jagged edge
Copyright ©
Jaycee
... [
2005-08-19 09:04:53]
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Re: Jagged Edge
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by pixie on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 09:28:43 AM AEST
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very descriptive and deep, well written, I have been on the jagged edge myself for a while now, hope you felt better for getting this all out
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Re: Jagged Edge
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 01:03:07 PM AEST
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(((Jaycee))))
you have the key to unlock the chains that bind you, i think you have so much to offer this world , i wish you could just see it ....
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Kara |
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Re: Jagged Edge
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 04:57:13 PM AEST
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a brilliant poem, but get out of the cycle before ur completly trapped
im always here if you need to talk
megs
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Re: Jagged Edge
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by Shnyzz on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 09:42:50 PM AEST
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| I see that this is a dark and dreary poem....i hope someone lightens your soul |
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