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Your Gift
Contributed by
Redhotchilichic
on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 04:27:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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One day I was sitting on a bench looking at the pale blue sky
Just pondering life and wondering why people have to lie
Then I asked myself the question
When people die, do they come back to their loved ones
And show them a sign?
The time just passed me by
When I saw a butterfly
Just fly by
It came down to land on my shoulder
Then I began to wonder
Wasn't the butterfly the creature you wanted
To come back as if you were to die?
I started to cry as I knew that this was your sign
And that it was time to let to go
You just came back to me to show
That you are fine
And the pain that I had felt could cease
Because you had finally found peace
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Redhotchilichic
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2005-08-19 04:27:17]
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Re: Your Gift
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by chaos_01 on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 05:10:27 AM AEST
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| That's a simple yet understanding poem!1 i have lost my mum such pain came over which was unbearable!! but knowing they are ok releases alot of things. And butterflys such gorgeous animals anyway i am yabbering on so perfect poem keep it up!! |
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Re: Your Gift
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 06:51:48 AM AEST
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| A truly beautiful poem!!!! Loved it! |
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Re: Your Gift
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by gery_giggles on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 10:23:42 PM AEST
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o wow, i loved this poem. sad but with a sense of joy. great write
luv |
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