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WHO'S RIGHT OR WRONG.
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emystar
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Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 03:42:44 AM in AEST
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Change my heart oh God, make it ever true.
Change my heart oh God, may I be like You.
You are the potter, I am the clay,
Mold me and make me, this is what I pray.
SultryRose's Signatures
All this kaos on planet Earth
We all come out crying at birth.
Major healing needs to come
from heaven, each-n-every one.
Now Lord, don't know
who's right or wrong.
Please help me with this song.
repeat
We scream, we holler we
loudly rant.
No wonder peace has no chance.
So in so did so and so, my God.
So much acussing on this sod.
Our soilders blowed up every day.
Broken heart's left in it's wake.
We need to take responsibility for self
Leave you, father with all the rest.
Our pain turns to ranting, insanity.
We all seek lifes justice, liberty.
Each time there's pain in hearts
Let go let God our healing start.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2005-08-19 03:42:44]
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Re: WHO'S RIGHT OR WRONG.
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 06:55:32 AM AEST
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| Great writting, very good poem. |
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Re: WHO'S RIGHT OR WRONG.
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 07:37:20 AM AEST
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Oh this is treal heart wrenching Emystar. And so very true. Every line fits our present situation. So much tragedy so much sorrow, even malice to score a higher point over the other., and exploiting controversial issues to wound
It is always the best to do what one knows is charitable, leave the self-rigteous hollering, and leave the rest to merciful God.
This is a wonderful poem. A true MASTERWORK and profoundly inspiring.
Love and peace
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by robertdavidson on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 07:55:05 AM AEST
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Poignant and deeply felt. Shows a real concern for the choas in the world. The rhyme scheme is a bit uneven, especially in the second last verse. Otherwise well-written.
Robert Davidson. |
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by shae on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:44:55 AM AEST
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| its very rare to hear about the world's chaos from the emotional aspects, and you did a very nice job at it. |
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Re: WHO'S RIGHT OR WRONG.
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 02:13:55 PM AEST
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Well done Emy...The fourth stanza was especially moving. Some thought provoking words you have here. Good job.
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Re: WHO'S RIGHT OR WRONG.
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by Skinney86 on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 06:14:27 PM AEST
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| Shows yo ur true concern for the world. Good write, like always... and thank you for your comments to me... |
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 06:10:41 PM AEST
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| Nice poem!.May it create a lot of healing umongst all in need,and guide those those who seek. |
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Re: WHO'S RIGHT OR WRONG.
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 12:20:20 PM AEST
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Emy, this is a beautiful poem/song and prayer. It sends a wonderful message; and the prayer and spirituality are subperb. This is an emotional and heartfelt write.
Thanks for posting this poem, the message needs to be heard!
Will |
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Re: WHO'S RIGHT OR WRONG.
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by Archie on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 01:29:33 AM AEST
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You have written a great poem here.
If we actually did what the bible said it would seem that our enemies would win. I will not go into that though (too contreversial) (John 6:15) |
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Re: WHO'S RIGHT OR WRONG.
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by inoc on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 06:18:10 PM AEST
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Oh that poem leaves us all wondering...
Your poem is written how most think..you wrote the ending well...let go ...let God ...our healing....start..
~and I agree with Archie~
coni |
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 02:38:38 AM AEST
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| fantastic write from a fantastic writer,,your poem spoke volumes , I loved it,,,, |
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by SocialMisfit on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 03:25:03 AM AEST
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| awsome poem emy. |
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Re: WHO'S RIGHT OR WRONG.
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by Archie on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 11:38:28 PM AEST
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| There is one word that describes the condition of the world: selfish. Your write is very good. |
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Re: WHO'S RIGHT OR WRONG.
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 11:49:31 PM AEST
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Deep Innervision
well done |
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Re: WHO'S RIGHT OR WRONG.
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:38:51 PM AEST
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Emy always so beautiful you keep on keeping on with a faith that know's no bounds. Filled with sad thruths this poem and yet with a never ending hope.
((((emystar))))
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