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Smile
Contributed by
Pray4Peace
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Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 01:37:16 AM in AEST
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Smile upon a vacant soul
On all the truths revealed.
Hatred knows no peace
For years of tormented lies.
Anguished screams hide it all
From the past of forgotten sins.
A Bleeding mind rots away
Until the savior comes for me.
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Pray4Peace
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2005-08-19 01:37:16]
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Re: Smile
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 01:41:26 AM AEST
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| I understand what you are trying to say, good write. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Smile
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 12:30:21 AM AEST
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A very good choice of words, my friend. They reach my heart.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Smile
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by inoc on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:49:22 AM AEST
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A wonderful combination of words that speak and ache for our Savious return...
thanks for submitting this...
coni |
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