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On Such a Beautiful Night
Contributed by
mangos
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Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 09:55:04 PM in AEST
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Sitting, investigating
Conjuring up worn out theories
Conspiracies, sworn enemies
Motivated by nothing
Other then what I see
Here at this place
I call home
I feel the most lost
The most alone
The most pleasant of evenings
Yet it rains in my bones
The most happy of seasons
Yet summer is forlorn
Caressing, loving
Exploring the night
Venturing into the forbidden
The dance, the sin
And so I was smitten
And so I was swept
Into something everlasting
Dreaming, waiting
Something fantastic
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Re: On Such a Beautiful Night
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 10:53:08 PM AEST
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I love this, I can't believe I was just saying pretty much the same thing!! That is so crazy...must be this beautiful night : )
The flow in this really sweeps along, it's great! Something fantastic....indeed; )
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Re: On Such a Beautiful Night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:22:27 AM AEST
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| This poem seemed to me to be introspective. Sorry if I am wrong. But I do know it's a great write and it's nice to have a dream, especially when it comes true. :) |
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Re: On Such a Beautiful Night
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 08:10:49 AM AEST
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| Lovely and well written poem :) |
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Re: On Such a Beautiful Night
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 10:12:12 PM AEST
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| wow, that was beautiful. i like how you used so many adjectives to really emphasize the meaning to the reader |
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