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you and me
Contributed by
maddie
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Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:46:54 PM in AEST
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remember the first time u told me u loved me
and how u said that this was ment to be
when i told u i loved u too
i guess i was the only one who really thought i through
so i guess this wasnt ment to be
although i still think about you and me
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Re: you and me
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 10:28:25 PM AEST
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| alot of true emotion here, short yet a great start. welcome to Y.P.D.C. I look foward to more writes from you. |
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Re: you and me
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 10:31:18 PM AEST
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| really good poem, especailly for your first. it always helps the flow if you dont wright in short hand though :) looking forward to reading more of your stuff |
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