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In My Dreams

Contributed by EricBRamey on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:44:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



There you are lying beside me,
You whisper in my ear that you want me,
I look into your eyes, losing myself in your love.

We lay in each other's arms and talk about us,
You kiss me on my mouth, and I taste your sweet lips,
I tell you that I love you, as tears fall down the pillow.

You make love to me, and I feel your body inside and out,
The love we share is unspoken, as we make our bodies one,
I never want it to end, as you touch my body with loving hands.

We fall asleep joined in each other's embrace,
This life we lead is one of love's true charms,
I love you so much as I hear you sleep.

I wake up from my world of love, into one of nightmare,
It was only a dream for you have gone,
I live my life now without.

Dreams are the worst when love has left,
I don't live in this place anymore,
It was so real, that I wonder if waking up...is going to sleep.

Eric B. Ramey

Copyright ©2005 Eric B. Ramey





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Re: In My Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 10:08:05 PM AEST
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oh the power of dreams. Sometimes being awake and having to live is the worst. I know how you feel. Good write. If I had a choice I would dream then having to live in this world that can be so cruel at times. thanks for posting.


Re: In My Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 11:03:00 PM AEST
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dreams are nothing ... the power of a poet is something ..
mary


Re: In My Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 11:06:23 PM AEST
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Well dreams are over powering..but dreams can be things that come true, and stay true.! beautiful write.!

Brew~


Re: In My Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 11:45:08 PM AEST
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  • Wow, astounding work!

    The way it seemed almost every word -belonged- there,
    and the way this piece steadily rises to a climax,
    but only to plunge off the cliff - a dream.

    I found the somewhat abrupt ending only added to the
    "completeness" in this piece..
    (No-one says dreams can't come true; once again.)

    Quite a powerful write here!


    ~KayT







  • Re: In My Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
    by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:33:35 AM AEST
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    Wow...Great creative write..Love it
    Don't think that dreams are worse when love has left... For thoses dreams were reality and the memories you will always have to treasure and enjoy through the power of dreams..
    Keep up the wonderful writing Eric..
    Hugggggggggs
    ~~~Michelle~~~




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