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My Little Baroque Beauty
Contributed by
Shade
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Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:38:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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She played my heart like a harpsichord
My little baroque beauty
Love ballads balanced and bound
She painted a heart on her sleeves
Oh how adorable
Little miss irony
I broke her piety
She heard my whispered screams
Smiled child-like
I was always the shy type
She molded me bold
I was a pawn in her mock bondage
She didn't like it when I played jump rope with the chains
I didn't know better
I told her she better know
Love making was ballet
Her plies and the way she pirouetted
And she sung opera
Toned and talented
Skin like the renaissance
She wore dresses made of autumn
I'd strip her bare 'till i saw winter
She bore fruit
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Shade
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2005-08-18 20:38:12]
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Re: My Little Baroque Beauty
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by rockergirl94 on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 02:37:14 PM AEST
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You did a really REALLY great job on this. You have so many great similes and metaphors. I also like how you made it such a free write- not having a rhyme sheme really makes me pay attention to the words you wrote.
The style of poem was really consistant as well, like it sounds like a 'reminisce' all the way through. Kudos to you for your imagery, I get mental pictures as I read it.
keep writing, keep hoping
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Re: My Little Baroque Beauty
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by WAE on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 01:08:00 PM AEST
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I found interesting comparisons in this...
Best wishes,
Alex |
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