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Midnight Rapture
Contributed by
chadbrown
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Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 07:54:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love lies dormant.
The sweet sedation of a cherry kiss.
As callused arteries unthaw,
And precious blood begins to flow.
Through entwined hearts,
And soft embrace.
Smoke & feathers
Carry faint whispers,
Of an unnamed emotion,
Spoken only by angels.
Copyright ©
chadbrown
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2005-08-18 19:54:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Midnight Rapture
(User Rating: 1 ) by wikedladi on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:16:31 PM AEST (User
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Re: Midnight Rapture
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:02:30 AM AEST (User
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Nicely constructed, smooth phrasing, rich imagery. Full of promise of what is becoming.
Spike |
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