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Missing You
Contributed by
darkhorse71
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Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 03:36:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Missing You
I sit and look at photographs,
harsh reminders of the past.
And through the cobwebs of my heart
I know your love is gone at last.
Your face, it haunts these hallways,
your voice whispers through the walls.
I can feel your eyes
when I look at the moon,
and I gaze in weary resignation
as my wishes fall from the sky
with my dreams.
As I stare up at the stars
I pray to go insane,
To live again in long ago
when joy was our domain.
So now I'll light a signal fire
and wait for you once more,
where I'll cast my love aside
'cause you won't share it anymore.
Softly now I close my eyes
and lightly will you fade,
as now I lay me down to sleep
forever and a day.
Darkhorse71
john
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Re: Missing You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 05:29:12 PM AEST
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sigh... very touching.. heartwrenching kind of way..
Wishing you the best
Hugggggggggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Missing You
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 06:54:49 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write John...."you know our love will not fade away".....Peace to you brother, Laura |
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Re: Missing You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 10:39:29 PM AEST
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nice. i loved it. thats how i feel at this moment
vonsfriend |
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Re: Missing You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 01:52:06 AM AEST
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| Oh, just beautiful. How familiar thoughts like those are to me. Great work. |
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Re: Missing You
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by SunflowersAndTea on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 10:09:36 PM AEST
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| aww. this is amazing...and it's so true...some lovers never do fade away.....and this type of lovely nostaligia reminds me of it so much.... .... i love the last bit "as now i lay me down to sleep/forever and a day" ....i dont' knwo but something about it is really inspiring... |
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