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My Happy Ending
Contributed by
ell_03
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Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 02:46:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My fears grow like a weed,
Ready to overtake my mind.
My tears flow like a river,
Threatening to leave me behind.
I don't know how to stop it,
Or what I'm supposed to do.
There must be some solution.
Why can't this just be through?
Please understand,
No don't cry!
This is my happy ending,
Goodbye.
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ell_03
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2005-08-18 14:46:33]
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Re: My Happy Ending
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 04:49:02 PM AEST
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| This is a very sad poem. I really hope that you dont follow in her footsteps. |
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Re: My Happy Ending
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by justme03 on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 05:59:45 PM AEST
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this made me cry. i have felt this way before and got close to dying and so i can understand the pain here. i wish she could have held on a bit longer, but perhaps the pain was too strong. peace and love to gain understanding and strength through your loss. *hugs*
luv, Kortnie |
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Re: My Happy Ending
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:28:25 AM AEST
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| This is so frigging sad, dammit I wish she would have been strong...times change, things change as we age. I remember when I was younger around that age; 14, not wanting to go on. Thank goodness I did. This is just so wrong, I look at my kids and hope they never feel that way about life. Peace to you, my sympathy to you and your friend's family, this is so tragic, Laura |
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Re: My Happy Ending
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by BloodyTears5 on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:18:40 AM AEST
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| very sad but very pretty. im sorry for you lost |
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