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Alone in the Dark
Contributed by
jaycee
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Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:24:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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alone in the dark
where no one can see
i waste away
a life melancholy
chained to my desk
i watch life pass me by
i'd tried but i'd failed
with others to fly
sweats torment each night
as i dream of one sweet
but the rem turns so bad
as i die at her feet
when nothing's left to say
having done all i can do
swan dive onto concrete
finally, the pain it is through
Copyright ©
jaycee
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2005-08-18 13:24:59]
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Re: Alone in the Dark
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:40:01 PM AEST
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Jaycee
this poem worried me and i hope you know how wonderful you really are with so much to offer and so much to live for . please know you always have a friend here , and please love yourself , you are beautiful and unique and are a child of God or (HP)
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Re: Alone in the Dark
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:34:41 PM AEST
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Kara is right, Jaycee... You have so much to live for and to offer...... It doesn't have to be this way.... YOU can change it....
Think about that.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Alone in the Dark
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by Jaycee on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 09:16:14 AM AEST
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| OMG, an average score of 1??? I'm tempted to create an account and give it a vote of 3, to bring the avg. to 2, lol. Wow, someone hated it that much to give it a 1. I'm sooooo glad that my life is so distasteful that somone has to give it a 1. Probably some rich, iced latté drinking snob who never had to struggle for anything... |
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