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Borrowed Eyes
Contributed by
littlelostgirl
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Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 12:20:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Bits of broken glass shimmering like dew
Glinting in the soft glow of the moon
Caught a glimpse of my reflection
" Those borrowed eyes were never your possession"
Jagged shards sparkling like a calm sea
Whisper temptingly, " Come drink of me"
Bits of broken glass ...
Like stars in a midnight sky
A fleeting thought before I die
Copyright ©
littlelostgirl
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2005-08-18 12:20:30]
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Re: Borrowed Eyes
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by pixie on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:03:49 PM AEST
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short but incredibly powerful and hard hittingm
pix xx |
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Re: Borrowed Eyes
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by GAMBITONE on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 03:52:50 PM AEST
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| Good job! SHAZAAM! NICE WORD PICTURE! |
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Re: Borrowed Eyes
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by desireemiote on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 03:27:28 PM AEST
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great write!
Megan(and her bun in the oven) |
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Re: Borrowed Eyes
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 03:36:33 PM AEST
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I saw someone comment on this and the title just completely drew me in.
I love this.
I cannot even believe it hasn't been commented on very much.
I really like the first stanza, it makes me think and wonder about the subject of the poem.
Great write.
Phyllis xxx |
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