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Snow Fall
Contributed by
EoAngel
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Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Snow is falling
On the ground
Children laughing
All around
Snowball fights
Angels made
And snowmen built
Throughout the day
Cries of laughter
Soon die down
Night claims day
Left without a sound
More snow falls
Throughout the night
Piling up
For tomorrows snow fight
Copyright ©
EoAngel
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2003-01-14 15:00:00]
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Re: Snow Fall
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 03:02:15 PM AEST
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| Very clever little poem Keep writing |
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Re: Snow Fall
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 03:04:00 PM AEST
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| This does not suck at all! A very fun poem. Nice job! |
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Re: Snow Fall
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 03:31:40 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, EoAngel... this was a lovely little poem..I enjoyed reading it. I have never seen snow and loved the fun you had with it... Hope to see many more of your poems here...
Jenni |
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Re: Snow Fall
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 05:50:31 PM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful....here where i live when it snows it only stays for about a day then melts...so i dont get to see snow every year...this is beautifully written EoAngel...welcome to YPDC...i look forward to reading more of your poetry....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Snow Fall
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by SusieQ on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 03:17:23 PM AEST
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| Dear EoAngel, You paint a pretty picture with your words that I can relate to easily here in Kansas, but, ooooooooh how I hate cold winds here.! You have talent. SusieQ |
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Re: Snow Fall
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 05:36:41 PM AEST
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| very good! |
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