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Beautiful Excuse
Contributed by
lickalolipop
on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 05:29:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You're crumpled up words
Thrown onto a fresh sheet of paper,
Smother me, Erase me, Complicate me.
One more hurtful line and you've scratched into me.
The pencil tip falls
Onto this wrinkled excuse of a paradise.
Lead smears and overlays
This beautiful excuse of an entity.
You're twisted up emotions
Dribble vaguely onto this paper,
Hurt smudges and smears
This beautiful excuse of a paradise.
You're crumpled up words
Thrown onto a fresh sheet of paper,
Smother me, Erase me, Complicate me.
One more hurtful line and you've scratched into me
Onto this wrinkled excuse of a paradise.
This beautiful excuse of an entity.
Copyright ©
lickalolipop
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2005-08-18 05:29:13]
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Re: Beautiful Excuse
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by Shade on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 06:13:56 AM AEST
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i think my favorite poems are the ones where the poet had no clue as to why or what they're writing. they tend to come from the truest purest most unfliltered side of your creative conciousness. - great poem
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Re: Beautiful Excuse
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:37:48 AM AEST
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awesome.........even though you did doubt yourself this is a brilliant piece of poetry!!!
..an accidental thought of the mind transformed into a captivating collection of words...
a real pleasure to read!!
Well done! |
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Re: Beautiful Excuse
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by Loende on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:10:17 PM AEST
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It IS the ones that just sneak up on us and need to get out that often speak most strongly to us and those that read them. I think that this is one of those ideas that will sit with people long after they read it. Well done indeed!
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Re: Beautiful Excuse
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by LickaLolipop on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 10:33:10 PM AEST
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Thank you so much guys.
I was really skeptical about posting this one.
Because I didn't know if my emotions were too
all over the place, you know?
Thanks for your guy's input :) |
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Re: Beautiful Excuse
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by juliette on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 03:42:15 PM AEST
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very unique, in both concept and style! I like it!
thanks for sharing!
juliette |
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