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Fire and Ice
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 04:42:55 AM in AEST
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Fire + Ice
She’s lost that fire
She’s lost the ice
She’s lost, she’s lost
She’s paid a price
She’s whittled down
To a careful specimen
We’ve lost the carefree girl
We lost her way back when
Evolved to perfection
Engineered with no flaw
She’s a shining polished diamond
Let’s all stand around in awe
She smiles all the time
But it’s all a façade
Her emotions are frozen
She’s no avant-garde
She’s got charisma galore
That she keeps away in a box
She uses it on special occasions
That’s when she’ll knock off those socks
She once had such fire
She once had such spice!
But she lost it, it’s gone
I hope she got a great price…
MW 18.08.05
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2005-08-18 04:42:55]
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Re: Fire and Ice
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by juliette on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 03:33:23 PM AEST
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I loved this, maybe because I can so totally relate, especially love the last line.........
thanks for sharing
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Re: Fire and Ice
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 06:34:42 PM AEST
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| it is a beautiful poem |
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