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All Alone
Contributed by
evilfairy
on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 04:03:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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All Alone
Red splashes
As the lightening crashes
And a little girl is crying
In her bedroom all alone
Music teases
As the world freezes
While she desperately hides
Further down then ever before
A single moment
Brings final atonement
Before an uncaring mirror
Reflecting only herself
In that final hour
They lose all their power
And she’ll never sit there crying
In her bedroom all alone
MW 18.08.05
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evilfairy
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2005-08-18 04:03:17]
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Re: All Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:41:38 AM AEST
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i like it.............powerful and touching....
well done, i think you've done an exceptional job! |
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Re: All Alone
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by pixie on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 09:09:01 AM AEST
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a very powerful and deep poem, very raw feelings you have displayed in your writing,
pix xx |
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