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wonderful sky
Contributed by
wikedladi
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Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 03:01:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Good morning sunshine!
How was ure sleep?
Did you dream of me...
Or things that might be?
Me?
I drempt only of you
We were some where far way
Exactly where i could not say
We were gazing at the sky
While puffy clouds swade by
Such a wonderful time we had
I cant remeber a time when i felt more glad
As day gave way to night
The change in the sky was a gloriuos sight
Shades of wonderful color shown bright
As the moon came forward to give us some light
When the stars all came too
You pullled me close, right next to you
Sweet words you whispered into my ear
Excalty what they where i did not hear
Shivers came over me like waves from the sea
An i couldnt help but think this is how life should be
Your warm embrace...
gave pinkish hue to me face
As i look up once more
The sky becomes tore
Sleep turns into wake
An my dream i realize was nothing but fake
Fading memories float by
Now, when i look to the sky
An your face shows once more
It is you whom i adore!
Copyright ©
wikedladi
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2005-08-18 03:01:35]
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Re: wonderful sky
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by emystar on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 03:08:48 AM AEST
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A beautifull write.
My youngest daughters nick name is sunshine.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: wonderful sky
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by ButchCorpuz on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 04:44:01 AM AEST
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Great poem. Sad though.
I know the feeling. There's this girl in my life.
I consider her to be only a dream that I wish
I wouldn't wake up from, but eventually, I will.
Keep writing!
-Butch
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Re: wonderful sky
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 05:36:49 AM AEST
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| Lovely poem and well written :) |
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Re: wonderful sky
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by pixie on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 09:13:45 AM AEST
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a sweet and lovely write, a very good poem,
pix xx |
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Re: wonderful sky
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by robertdavidson on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 12:15:13 AM AEST
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A very beautiful and heart-warming poem with some beautiful images and phrases. I enjoyed reading this.
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