Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 10-November 10:45:04 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

take what you can by dylan kellogg

Contributed by dylan14 on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:55:46 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



some times you hate this world some times you love it but one day it will all be gone so just take what you can and enjoy it..




Copyright © dylan14 ... [ 2005-08-18 01:55:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: take what you can by dylan kellogg (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 02:46:29 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Hi dylan,
It's a great start and welcome.
huggs,
emy


Re: take what you can by dylan kellogg (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 03:28:49 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)


  • Hey there Dylan.
    Nice to see there are more fellow 14-yr olds 'round here. ^^

    Your words are very true,
    and yes, welcome to YPDC, our big family.

    *hugs*

    ~KayT





  • Re: take what you can by dylan kellogg (User Rating: 1 )
    by Jenni_K on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:21:30 AM AEST
    (User Info | Send a Message)
    Sound bit of advice here, Dylan.....
    Welcome to YPDC..
    Jenni


    Re: take what you can by dylan kellogg (User Rating: 1 )
    by JenJen on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 11:15:52 AM AEST
    (User Info | Send a Message)
    A great poem dylan
    short but to the point
    welcome to ypdc :)
    Jenny
    xxx


    Re: take what you can by dylan kellogg (User Rating: 1 )
    by Spike on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:27:27 AM AEST
    (User Info | Send a Message)
    Hi Dylan, and welcome.

    if you don't mind, I'll offer some comments that I wish I got when I was 14 yrs old.

    If you structure the post like a poem it would look better eg

    Sometimes you hate this world,
    Some times you love it
    But one day it will all be gone, so
    Just take what you can
    -and enjoy it.

    All your thoughts and feelings are still there, but the (suggested) structure and delivery is what makes it a poem, and not just a statement or story.

    There are all kinds of poetry styles, including classical, modern, rhyming, open verse. Do a bit of reading about it, have a look at other poems on the site and keep writing and experimenting. Good luck,

    Spike




    While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

    Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

    Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
    Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

    All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

    All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

    Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com