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* Us*
Contributed by
shae
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Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:22:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The way you make me feel, I can't even explain
All day and all night, you make my heart go insane
All the late nights, we satyed up together
When I felt bad, you made me feel better
Your not ashamed of me, nor am I ashamed of you
We're just two young lovers, in a world with no clue
Soon you'll go of, and leave me all alone
We'll only talk once a week,Unfortunaely, by telephone
Then it goes to once a month, and eventually, we'll drift apart
We will have our seperate worlds, but you'll always have my heart
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shae
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2005-08-18 01:22:26]
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Re: * Us*
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:28:25 AM AEST
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| so sweet makes me sad :( . Good writing though |
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Re: * Us*
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by emystar on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 02:42:06 AM AEST
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I agree sad but beautifully written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: * Us*
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by ButchCorpuz on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 04:49:33 AM AEST
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Smoothly written! Undeniably sad, though.
Yes, it's hard when you drift away from the
person that you love. The painful thing about
it is the way you slowly drift apart. It's like
savouring the pain.
Keep writing!
-Butch
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Re: * Us*
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by JenJen on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 11:19:29 AM AEST
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an brilliant write well done
i hope this special perosn knows how you feel about them, you never know theymight feel the same about you too!
All my love, hope and wishes
Jenny
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