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You Don't Try to Be Perfect
Contributed by
sir_odd87
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 10:44:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your hair worn in a ponytail,
With glasses on your nose
As I stand back and watch you
Every move is like a pose.
You don't like being photographed,
Drawn, or even studied.
And you don't believe it when I say,
"You're more gorgeous than anybody"
You don't try to be perfect,
Against this fact, you would bet.
But the less you try to be perfect,
The closer you seem to get.
Your hair's down from its ponytail,
The glasses, nowhere to be found,
And when I look into your eyes
I can hear my own heart pound.
Your beauty is a natural thing
Something you don't try to do.
But this might be accentuated,
By how deep I'm in love with you.
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Re: You Don't Try to Be Perfect
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by brew on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 10:47:29 PM AEST
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Simply Beautiful ans true to her heart....................Bravo
Brew~ |
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Re: You Don't Try to Be Perfect
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 11:25:22 PM AEST
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| Oh you sweetheart you, your girl sounds lucky to have a fellow like you. What a lovely write. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: You Don't Try to Be Perfect
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by Sahara on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:53:00 AM AEST
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| This is an absolutely brilliantly beautiful write. |
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Re: You Don't Try to Be Perfect
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 04:35:44 PM AEST
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:: blush:: You've backed me into a corner..If I disagree, I appear to be ungrateful, or a fisher...if I agree and say thankyou, I appear to be vain...what's a girl to do?
it IS a beautiful poem, and I AM very lucky to have you.. |
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Re: You Don't Try to Be Perfect
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 03:07:44 AM AEST
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| Wow...This is so beautiful and full of emotion. Wonderful work. I should read more of your work. |
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