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somethings wrong
Contributed by
nannerz
on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 08:45:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I think theres something wrong with me
maybe Im sick
I cant seem to stop
Dreams of blooding flowing
haunt me at night
I only feel alive
as Im watching
the blood flow
Maybe Im proving to myself
even when I feel dead inside
my heart still beats
pumping blood to my vains
till I slash them open
and watch the blood spill
I have had so many friends
but in the end
I have had only one friend
my knife
it has never left
Been here though my worst times
and even some of the best
tonight it will see
my last breath
Maybe theres something wrong
but after tonight
I will be gone
so everything
will be alright
Copyright ©
nannerz
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2005-08-17 20:45:10]
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Re: somethings wrong
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 08:48:22 PM AEST
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| that one definately hit home for me. i hope times get better for you. things always get better, remember that. |
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Re: somethings wrong
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 11:53:34 PM AEST
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| sometimes you wander if you can do anything right. I think that a lot of people can relate to this. Hope things get better. |
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Re: somethings wrong
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by brokenandinlove16 on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 12:22:46 AM AEST
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| its not you... its your heart, it is broke and doesnt know how to heal... keep your head up and remember... God never gives more than anyone can handle!! ... ive been were you are and I know there is nothin anyone can say.... but i will tell you that a journal can help... i have one called "my journal of emotions" let ur journal be your friend... (it doesnt leave scars)... if its the pain that makes you feel better, try holding ice to your bare skin... (it also doesnt leave scars... thats what my counciler says for me to do)... good luck.... *many hugs* from a friend unknown... -amber |
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