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when it rains
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 08:31:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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as the rain falls down
my pain washs away
my tears mixing in
and im not crying alone
The rain will rejuvante
setting me free
washing away my sins
As a new day begins
I cannot wait
for the rain again
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2005-08-17 20:31:01]
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Re: when it rains
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by lost13 on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 08:33:10 PM AEST
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| i thought it was good. i could tell what you were feeling. |
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Re: when it rains
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by brew on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:38:31 PM AEST
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Hmmm so differ for you.whats up? You usually write happy?! Still to the heart.
Brew~ |
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