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Contributed by
Urizen
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 06:52:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Appearing between twlight
A staggering almost impossible silence,
Unopposed
Naked, unjust wilderness,
No-one comes here,
No-one dares,
Evil, no suprise,
Sparse clothes hanging from ragged bricks,
Blood?
Or just inventive imagination,
A crow calls,
Death, just death awaits us now,
The snap of twigs under foot,
A mass of rubble,
Unknown, uncared for, unloved
Home,
For someone, Sometime,
Lonely,
Perversion of the soul,
Now left to crumble slowly, disjointed.
Copyright ©
Urizen
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2005-08-17 18:52:07]
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Re: Home
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by Stellar on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 07:11:31 PM AEST
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I really like the way the lines are broken up in pieces.
It really gives the poem a very distinctive feel and attitude.
Nicely written!
Take care,
Lizzie |
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Re: Home
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 08:26:32 PM AEST
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| it left me with a meloncholy feel, I felt each word .I relate to it greatly you did an incredible job on this write |
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Re: Home
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by ebooibo on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:52:18 PM AEST
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| WOW NO WORDS BUT YO THATS REAL PLEASE DONT EVERY STOP WRITING KEEP IT COMING.....GREAT POEM |
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