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Something Special
Contributed by
lancaster
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 06:13:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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In the nest that we have built
We will live livelier still
Oceans crash on our porch
As we rock and cradle the night
A calming sensation
When I feel your hand grab for mine
Keep me close to your head
So that your lips are never afar
Anytime you wish to subdue me
Speak the words
And I am yours
And you can only be mine
It is a lesson learned in time
Grow with me
And I am yours
And it will never die
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2005-08-17 18:13:38]
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Re: Something Special
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 06:36:15 PM AEST
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This sounds very peaceful...It's beautiful, and I love it.
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Re: Something Special
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by Stellar on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 07:16:55 PM AEST
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This is very sweet. I like the way it appeals to the sense of touch in the beginning.
Very well written and the last stanza is moving.
Take care,
Lizzie |
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Re: Something Special
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by Sahara on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 10:37:43 PM AEST
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Very beautiful write, I loved it!
Sonya |
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Re: Something Special
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:22:58 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful write. Keep it up! :) |
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