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Love
Contributed by
justme03
on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 06:10:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Longing desires and secret glances.
Overnight dreams of ecstasy.
Venture to the unknown; i'll take you wherever you want to go, as we
Entwine our bodies into a beautiful bliss.
LOVE!!!
~Kortnie~
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2005-08-17 18:10:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stellar on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 07:14:04 PM AEST (User
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Clever placement of words.
Love is a lot of different things.
One thing's for sure, it's definitely the most powerful emotion around. |
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Re: Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by arakrune on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:33:56 PM AEST (User
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intresting
i like it
few word
maximum effect |
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Re: Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 06:11:22 AM AEST (User
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You are amazing with words & structure..... I couldn't do what you do.... you are remarkable!! |
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Re: Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by colinbaker62 on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 11:11:34 AM AEST (User
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Another great acrostic 'K' , wonderful !
Collywobbles.
Well, everyone ages ! |
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Re: Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Channing on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 07:24:52 PM AEST (User
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I like it, its so short yet has the full impact of what your trying to get across, LOVE! |
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