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Promise of the Death
Contributed by
WAE
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 05:33:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Promise of the Death
Would you like to know a secret?
One that people have forgotten,
An enigma old as world,
Which nobody seems remebeber.
I’ll tell it in private
When no others are around;
Only I and You and the secret
That will bring us all together.
Day or night, I will be waiting
For patience’s my only virtue;
You, enjoy your life in plenty –
Leave the secret for the ending.
Alexei Ogorodov, 2005
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Re: Promise of the Death
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by ChromePlatedHrt on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 10:31:45 PM AEST
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| Very good write...I hope you get to tell "your secret" |
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Re: Promise of the Death
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by Pray4Peace on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 03:13:51 AM AEST
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| I liked this poem. Now I am curious about your secret. Oh, and I have a brother named Alexei. Nice write, I can't wait to read more of your stuff. |
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Re: Promise of the Death
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by dagonet on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 02:05:10 PM AEST
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this one is brilliant, i think that the way it is written is superb, i love the twisted happiness ppl are given when being tempted with a secret, that is captured brillaintly in this one.
and the line "For patience’s my only virtue" is my favorite, it conveys so much mystery and darkness by implying so many things in the readers minds. that wonderfull question of "what are we waiting for"
excellent write. ryan
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Re: Promise of the Death
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by justgulliver on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 01:22:10 PM AEST
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| i know the secret too. |
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