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my life passes like the storm
Contributed by
starry_eyed_soul
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Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 03:50:51 PM in AEST
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oops
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lighning strike me to the ground
thunder reveals my head hitting the floor
the tears stream down like rain
my life mirrors the storm after all
silhouettes cast shadows among the night
on this dark dreary life of mine
but theres always a good day to come
once the gloom of the storm is over
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Re: my life passes like the storm
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by sprinter27 on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 01:21:26 PM AEST
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nice write, starry eyed. you expressed yourself well and truthfully. but remember throughout a storm there will always be shelter. well done, keep it up. take care.
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Re: my life passes like the storm
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by Somnium on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 04:15:45 PM AEST
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Very positive outlook
Stay strong
Ben
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